Rookie writing
Tuesday, Jul 18, 2006
My day was just getting along just fine until I read this observation from Ernest Hemingway, “Real seriousness in regard to writing is one of two absolute necessities. The other, unfortunately, is talent.”
Rats.
This week– for some reason that I’ve since forgotten– I was thinking about a required art class I took in college. I hated that class. It’s not that I hate art; it’s just that I don’t appreciate it nearly enough. I wouldn’t have known my stick figures were substandard unless my kids informed me, but I’m glad they are honest. Anyway, I learned something in that class which I was thinking about earlier this week.
I realized that if one wants to learn to draw, one must first learn to see. My drawings improved once I was able to look– really look– at the lines, the shape, the form of an object. I think what I’m referring to might be called “perspective,” but I didn’t pay attention well enough to say. Having a concrete object in front of me did wonders to improve the dimensionality of my drawings. After time spent in study and observation, drawing became easier, though it will never be natural for me. Despite what Walt Disney believes, imagination can only take you so far. For those of us who lack talent, it’s all just a pile of hard work.
Writing is a lot like drawing, though I do believe that I wholeheartedly prefer one to the other. The ability to write well is tied inextricably to the ability to see well. Writers take the raw material of life and serve it on palatable plates, which makes the grim portions go down easier and the ho-hum pieces more savory. Good writers help us see what we’ve been missing.
I’m not writing about good writers because I imagine myself one, though I hope more time in study, hard work, and a meteor falling on my morbid lot will remedy that one day. Rather, the subject comes to mind because I wonder what makes a writer, a writer. Certainly one’s grammar usage comes into play at least a little. Is one a writer simply because one takes pen to paper or fingers to keyboard? Does one need readers in order to be a writer? Does journaling count? Is the quality of one’s writing tied to the amount of currency one can command for his words? And what about blogging? (Yeah, what about it.)
Blogging is a form of writing whose rules are—precisely because there are none– more difficult to grasp. The question of whether a writer needs readers is akin to the old question, If a tree falls in the middle of a deserted forest, does it make a sound? If a writer writes to no one, does she write? Well, of course, she does. The question is really, Does she make a difference? Maybe and maybe not.
Professional writers aren’t the only ones with readers anymore. Blogging has opened up a whole new venue for those who would have never had the opportunity otherwise. For myself, it has prodded me to see life more clearly and look at it more critically. Because if I am going to write about my life—just like an artist must do– I must look at the lines, the shape, the form of it more closely. This is healthy, so long as one can keep from airbrushing, gross introspection, or any of the other many narcissistic maladies common to man.
All that to say, thank you for dropping in sometimes to look at life along with me. And forgive me for taking so long to say so. Writing about my life is one thing. Living a life worth writing about is a whole other matter. The latter is the better virtue, so I’ll sign off for now.
Writing is an adventure. To begin with, it is a toy and an amusement. Then it becomes a mistress, then it becomes a master, then it becomes a tyrant. The last phase is that just as you are about to be reconciled to your servitude, you kill the monster and fling him to the public. ~Winston Churchill
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I’ve totally enjoyed your writing and reading about your life since finding you “accidentally”. I didn’t even know what a blog was at that time. And now somehow I’ve got one and I would aspire to write with as much perspective as you!
Comment by Susanne (July 18, 2006 @ 3:06 pm )
While I wish I could write well, I would much rather live a life worth writing about than just writing about my life. (now if someone else could just write about it for me!)
Comment by Anita (July 18, 2006 @ 5:14 pm )
Really, this is a good post. It just stings a bit. I love writing, but hate grammar. I may be able to put words together, but they won’t be speled wright and the punctuation will stink?
If it is talent that makes a good writer, I am doomed. If good use of grammar makes a good writer, I am sunk and will continue to sink like the sink hole near my house. Further, if it is readers that makes a writer…forget it let’s not go there.
I agree with Churchill. Writing is and adventure, toy, mistress and master. But, it is ironic that the monster we must slay is a beast of our own creation. Mine is much like Frankenstien, a laboratory oops. Now, it is up to me to slay the mutant beast. It is my own baby, my own creation. I am starting to view the display of the dead beast to the public like I view my husband’s trophy deer heads on the wall. It’s gotta go. Give me the flowers and artistic paintings in lieu of the trophy buck. God Bless you, Amy for your talent and insights!!
Comment by KSMilkmaid (July 18, 2006 @ 5:24 pm )
I’ve written about this and thought about this concept a lot. What makes a writer? I think that someone who appreciates the art of writing is a writer, just as one can be an artist because they enjoy to watercolor at home. Writing seems harder to define, because if you “just” journal or blog you might not have what seems like a real work of writing produced, but if you paint a picture, no matter how unskilled it seems, you have produced a painting–art!
I do think that your writing is very well crafted. Don’t be so humble on yourself.
Comment by Jennifer, Snapshot (July 18, 2006 @ 5:25 pm )
It was a blessing for me to land on your blog today. I have been struggling under a writing project for the last four days. Your words were eloquent and helpful. Thank you.
Comment by Lynn Donovan (July 18, 2006 @ 6:02 pm )
I so enjoyed this post, Amy. Thank you. I so relate. I started a blog a while back and been laboring to become a better wordsmith, relearn grammar rules I’ve long forgotten, share meaningfully, etc. I’d be embarrassed to let anyone know how long it takes me to compose a post (so out of practice of writing). But it is well worth it, isn’t it? It does somehow bring clarity. And the creative adventure of it all is so fun.
Comment by Miriam (July 18, 2006 @ 8:07 pm )
What a lovely perspective you have on writing! My mom is an artist and loves art history and the likes. I have a difficult time appreciating all that she does. But I must say, I do appreciate fine writing, and I think yours falls into that category.
Comment by Joanne (July 18, 2006 @ 8:20 pm )
I loved reading your perspective on writing. And if it’s any consolation, I just tried to read Old Man and the Sea by Earnest Hemmingway and I have to say, I much prefer reading a blog post to that book. It had what my daughter calls “a gum chewing” element. A whole lot of work and difficult to digest. Blogging provides nutritious bite size morsels that are usually delicious and easy to digest. I count your blog a nutritional staple in my diet.
Comment by Spunky (July 18, 2006 @ 10:28 pm )
Great post. I enjoy your style of writing and reading your thoughts.
Comment by Wendy (July 19, 2006 @ 7:09 am )
“Living a life worth writing about is a whole other matter” — and maybe the most important. Or maybe everybody lives that life, and has a story worth writing about; the challenge is recognizing and telling it in a way where people go, “hey, that’s me!” You’re doing that.
Comment by Gary (July 19, 2006 @ 10:15 am )
Amy, this is a most thoughtful and considered reflection on writing. If it makes anyone here feel any better, I have a PhD in English literature, and generally have excellent grammar and what is considered a fairly elegant style, and writing is still a slog for me (and I do a lot of it). Of course, whether or not I have any talent is questionable–but I think people who have heaps of it still can’t escape the hard-work element!
Keep writing, Amy; we’re all richer for it. I say that truly.
Comment by Mrs. P. (July 19, 2006 @ 11:51 am )
You write beautifully. I’ve always ‘wanted’ to be a writer - though I’ve always written. I assumed that only those who were paid for their work had earned the right to hang the ‘writer’ shingle outside their doors.
I think a writer can’t help but to write. Personally, I find there’s no greater pleasure than to evoke a certain emotion, or to hear ‘you made my day’ because of something I’ve written.
Well, as a mom, I guess there is one greater pleasure - first time obedience.
Comment by Cindy (July 20, 2006 @ 11:05 pm )
Really enjoyed these thoughts on writing. I was challenged and convicted by your last couple sentences …
Loved that! Quite profound.
Comment by Ashleigh (July 22, 2006 @ 2:56 pm )
It was a search for humility that allowed me to safely land into your blog. I have often heard of such sites, but is my first experience viewing one. Regretfully I must admit, my desire to write is limited by the time I devote to it. I have written prose and poetry for self ammusement, or as a gift for a friend, but not to enlighten anyone. My career is demanding, and I have come to realize that it is the giving of myself for the benefit of others, that charts my course to humility. I have also discovered that effective writing is a lasting tool to affect my attempt at humility. Thank you for the opportunity to read thought provoking commentary. I shall write a poem that reminds me to embrace humility to better serve others, and carry it with me always.
Comment by Gerry (July 29, 2006 @ 3:21 am )